Don't be afraid to revise your poem multiple times. Read your lines out loud. Ask yourself:
Walaloo mana barumsaa koo extra qualityBarsiisota koo kan natti dhimman,Ija koo ibsanii naaf ibsan. walaloo mana barumsaa koo extra quality
Manni barumsaa tokko bifa miidhagaa fi "extra quality" kan qabaatu barsiisota gootota ta’anini. Barsisoonni keenya guyyaa fi halkan hojjetanii dhaloota qubee qaxalee uumu. Inni nu qarre, nu qajeelche. Don't be afraid to revise your poem multiple times
Galanni kee hin dhumu, mana koo tiyyaa,Ati naaf dabarsitee, dhiphuu fi hiraanyatniyyaa.Barsiisonni keenya, urjii iftuu halkanii,Nu daddafsiisanii, nu geessan bilchinatti. nu qajeelche. Galanni kee hin dhumu
Walaloo mana barumsaa koo extra qualityBakka ani beekumsa qabuu dhaloota koo.